Friday, January 29, 2010

"This is Just to Say" Parody-By Alex G.

I have eaten

the cake

that was in

the fridge


and which

you were probably

preserving

for your wedding


Forgive me

it was delicious

so sweet

and so yummy

1 comment:

  1. Concerning your parody. I like the ideas you have but I don't think this follow what a parody is. It looks as if you were replacing a few words with a few other words. This was similar to what I did and Mindi told me that it was not a parody. Remember, a parody is usually mocking something in some sense, and does more than just model it. There's a message (though it may be lighthearted or respectful) behind the parodic choices. Good start though but I would actually double check with Mindi to see if this is could work as a parody. Thats what I did and it helped out a lot.

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